Charlie II

An interesting question, and an equally interesting essay. You clearly know your facts and terminology, your argument flows logically, and your essay form is good as well. I do have ...

Ah. Very nice. ;) The twist was, of course, unexpected, but I felt it came a little too early to have maximum impact. I see that this is a contest ...

Machavell Labour Slave He came back to the ship, and the pain, and the fire. Machavell kept his eyes shut as he fought a new battle inside himself. Failure . ...

Machavell Labour slave Black gloves. God only knew what state the flesh was in beneath them. That was the price of magic, the cost of channelling power through skin and ...

Machavell Labour Slave Of course they couldn't take them. Machavell was no fighter, even if his muscles were not weak and atrophied from their time in manacles. Kester-- he was ...

Machavell Labour Slave And so it continued. He had been thinking, quietly; the night's events had unfolded rapidly and he was determined to twist them to his advantage. He would ...

Thoughts : If the main group are off to butcher the remaining crew, Machavell will certainly not be going with them. He'll cooperate, but would much prefer to be away ...

I've done my best to portray a paranoid Kester! Hope it's good enough! ;) It seems the storm is clearing up now. We can't spend too long on one night, ...

Machavell Labour Slave The storm was dying down, waves rocked the ship ever more gently. The swaying motion made Machavell drowsy, reminded him of cradles and childhood. He carefully suppressed ...

Lord Anzius >> Don't worry about it. We're all learning and trying to improve, so I'm sure whatever was said was not intended to insult you personally. The writers here ...

FinalFreedom, I like your style! ;) So, how about that. A little weakness and antagonism for poor Machavell! Please do say if I've portrayed Videl wrongly. I tried to incorporate ...

Machavell Labour Slave "Hello, I'm Videl. Nice to..er...meet you." Machavell felt the heat rise to his cheeks. Fire seethed in his blood and, steadily, it began to boil over. He ...

Of the known characters, Machavall seems most fitting. :P Lol. ;) Will see what I can do. I'm going to write a post out now and then probably upload it ...

Multiple descriptions going on here, so just to clear it up, are our characters the only ones on the ship as far as slaves go, or are there others? Good ...

Machavell Labour Slave He felt no pity for the bleeding wreck of a man who was returned to the cell. The guard had done a thorough job; Machavell respected that. ...